A poem.

Not as simple as 1,2,3-
everything wrong with no principle.
All this clear to see,
but still finding the chase.

Afterall, feelings are involved.
Who cares that it may be a disgrace?
As time passed by, they evolved.

In too deep,
the mountain growing,
becoming too steep
to conquer.

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  • ken bultman on Nov 15, 2009

    Sometimes the mountain must be attempted whether the top is reached or whether it always remains just out of reach.

  • Hansika on Nov 15, 2009

    very great…

  • Teves on Nov 15, 2009

    Excellent…

  • ashan1614 on Nov 15, 2009

    Nothing in life is as easy at it seems before you start the climb. Good write!

  • svishnugopal on Nov 15, 2009

    well said…don\’t say it is not reachable or achievable unless you make a try..and always keep trying…

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