Sometimes lazy habits and bad choices prevent healthy eating.

Too many

sausages from the BBQ,

Yet another

take-away meal,

No wonder I’m starting

to feel

YUCK!


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My system

is clogged up

and not feeling good,

More determination is needed,

to eat plenty of greens,

vitamins, minerals

carbs and protein.

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Drink lots of water,

Flush out greasy food,

I’ll make the decision

and start

feeling

good.

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  • Patrick Regoniel on Jan 24, 2010

    So true. :-)

  • ken bultman on Jan 24, 2010

    Tomorrow. Do it tomorrow.

  • Lady Sunshine on Jan 24, 2010

    Lol @ Ken. Don’t listen to him…that’s just how he eats. This piece totally made me laugh. I’m sure many people can relate.

  • PR Mace on Jan 24, 2010

    Oh, how you speak to me. I have been having problems getting my eating under control since our anniversary on the 8th. As soon as I get done here I am hitting the treadmill.

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Jan 24, 2010

    My brother loved barbecuing meat. It killed him at the ripe old age of 56. :(

  • Val Mills on Jan 24, 2010

    Just the point I’m trying to make, Mary Patricia Bird, but will I listen to myself…..

  • standingproud on Jan 24, 2010

    eat those greens no matter what…
    No dont wait till tomorrow,lol ha ha ….you might end up real bad..
    bloody good write,lol

  • Karen Gross on Jan 24, 2010

    Why does the food that is bad for us have to taste so good? It seems like a universal parenting concern that kids won’t eat their vegetables.

    Great poem.

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 25, 2010

    why are good things so bad for you :)

  • Shirley Shuler on Jan 25, 2010

    Lol, I can relate to this one, Val.

  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 25, 2010

    Nice sharing.

  • Frances Lawrence on Jan 25, 2010

    Well written, I had similar thoughts myself at the weekend.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 25, 2010

    ha ha that write i agree with 8shei8

  • Starpisces on Jan 25, 2010

    those meat seem over-grilled, the colour so dark, ha ha….
    Very enjoyable to read, thanks!

    p/s : suddenly I feel hungry…

  • VTech on Jan 25, 2010

    NICE POST, THANKS FOR SHARING.

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