A longer moment.

with the waves of
digital sapphires, emeralds
and iridescent rubies
pounding my retinas,
i remember how
we’re not always
clawing for bundles
of logs and lighting
only our own flame.
i forget it
quickly after-
not the words,
but neurons that sprang
forth chemicals of “yes”.
i enjoyed
feeling the subtle rush
of believing.

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  • Martin Kloess on Mar 16, 2011

    very good

  • pruelpo on Mar 16, 2011

    You deeply meant it with those images. Love it dude.

  • goygoy on Mar 16, 2011

    nice share dude!. .keep it up, by the way thanks for being my fan . .thank you

  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 16, 2011

    good poetry

  • iva75cpb on Mar 16, 2011

    I like it, it was very good!

  • jeffersonh on Mar 16, 2011

    I like this one a lot. It’s a short poem but it says a lot.

  • V rank on Mar 20, 2011

    It is good to read.

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