November 11th/09 Haiku with Jenny Heart: The Universe

Jenny Heart on Nov 10, 2009

Tags: Haiku, Poetry, universe

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A Haiku about the universe.

Bless this universe

Come rain or come shine each day

Never tear it down

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Comments (16)

wonder on Nov 10, 2009
Necessary,blessings are always necessary.
Goodselfme on Nov 10, 2009
well done, my friend. I pressed the like it button, but doubt if it registered for the one before me since it said ONE when I pressed it.
Guy Hogan on Nov 10, 2009
A poem of universal hope and love. I like it.
Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 11, 2009
lovely haiku….
cutedrishti8 on Nov 11, 2009
A lovely one I liked it
LoveDoctor on Nov 11, 2009
Very nice. good work.
LoveDoctor on Nov 11, 2009
Very nice. good work. I am getting a forbidden again.
Themax on Nov 11, 2009
another cute Jenny ,Thanks for sharing
martie on Nov 11, 2009
nice haiku
giftarist on Nov 11, 2009
Lovely!
Hansika on Nov 11, 2009
nice one..
CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 11, 2009
Unique and lovely piece, thanks!
PR Mace on Nov 11, 2009
Well written words.
Ruby Hawk on Nov 11, 2009
well done,
Starpisces on Nov 16, 2009
nice, I should start to write Haiku, hahaha
CutestPrincess on Nov 29, 2009
I enjoyed your haiku. Nice words.

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