A Haiku about being hopeless or hopeful. One needs to think about the word hopeless. Now! Go think of a plan to make hopeful a daily word in your life.

Hopeless or hopeful

The mind will need to figure

Both strong emotions

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  • Hansika on Nov 12, 2009

    nice one

  • Goodselfme on Nov 12, 2009

    Powerful message.TX

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 12, 2009

    I totally agree with the comment above: Powerful… I will keep this in mind from now on. Good haiku and definitely something to think about.

  • ShaFar on Nov 13, 2009

    Thought provoking. Great writing, as always.

  • wonder on Nov 13, 2009

    A recipe beyond the confines of the kitchen.

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 13, 2009

    dats a good Haiku again!!

  • Themax on Nov 13, 2009

    Ahh…..Jenny another cute and beautiful Haiku with a very strong message!! Thank you :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 13, 2009

    They certainly are very strong emotions. Nice work.

    Christine

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 13, 2009

    The difference between these words are only “-less” and “-ful”. It’s always better to stay at “hopeful” because it brings strength to live.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 13, 2009

    Good one again

  • PR Mace on Nov 14, 2009

    A powerful message.

  • CutestPrincess on Dec 1, 2009

    what a beautiful haiku!

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 11, 2009

    Two little words but both very powerful. Nicely done.

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