A Haiku about the gift from a true heart. It’s about love being gold wrapped.

A gift is a gift

The heart doth give to someone

Love is wrapped in gold

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  • Guy Hogan on Nov 13, 2009

    Love is its weight in gold but love cannot be measured. I agree.

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 13, 2009

    This is great work. I love it.

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 14, 2009

    another good haiku… gr8 one…

  • wonder on Nov 14, 2009

    Love shines brighter than the sun, great work.

  • ken bultman on Nov 14, 2009

    I truly enjoyed this one.

  • Themax on Nov 14, 2009

    great Haiku Jenny ,Love it and always love your work :)

  • chitragopi on Nov 14, 2009

    True words in a lovely haiku

  • PR Mace on Nov 14, 2009

    This one touched my soul.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 14, 2009

    True love can’t be measured. It’s priceless. Great haiku again!

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 14, 2009

    Great lines… :)

  • xoxo on Nov 14, 2009

    Love is wrapped in gold… Very true.

  • Goodselfme on Nov 14, 2009

    Very well expressed with truth, friend.

  • Raja on Nov 14, 2009

    Very nice article. I like the title.

  • deep blue on Nov 20, 2009

    Love freely given is genuine love. Lovely haiku.

  • Enlightenedpsych2 on Nov 22, 2009

    freely given, not feared to be taken for granted. Beautiful haiku

  • CutestPrincess on Dec 5, 2009

    short and simple… love it!

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 11, 2009

    I love the part about love being wrapped in gold because both are considered precious. Good job.

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