November 1St & 2Nd Haiku with Jenny Heart: Disappointments & Recognition

Jenny Heart on Nov 2, 2009

Tags: arts, forms, Haiku and Related Forms, literature, Poetry

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A Haiku about disappointments and recognition. One for each day.

My disappointments

My mind feels trapped within

My disappointments

My recognition

The face of disappointment

Turned and found joy

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Comments (18)

deep blue on Nov 2, 2009
Nice one. Life is both sides of a coin ruled into one.
Jenny Heart on Nov 2, 2009
There should be a space inbetween the first and second Haiku. I hope the fix takes. Thanks!
cutedrishti8 on Nov 2, 2009
very well said deep blue
CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 2, 2009
I agree. This is another good Haiku. Keep it up!
PR Mace on Nov 3, 2009
Well versed.
Goodselfme on Nov 3, 2009
Well done!
LoveDoctor on Nov 3, 2009
Great haiku. I like it.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 3, 2009
I really enjoyed those. Well done.

Christine
ken bultman on Nov 3, 2009
Don’t worry about the space. Fixes rarely take. Nice haikus.
Mr Ghaz on Nov 3, 2009
Another great Haiku poem..I totally agree with that..:)I loved it..cheers
Themax on Nov 3, 2009
nice article thanks!!!
martie on Nov 3, 2009
I kind of liked the two haiku blended.
ashan1614 on Nov 3, 2009
Good write! Often our stumbling blocks become stepping stones.
Jane Jane on Nov 3, 2009
excellent haiku. I find out that you are really good with haiku.
K.Reshma on Nov 3, 2009
Very nice poem
Idazalee on Nov 3, 2009
lovely and unique presentation..loved this poem..well done
Trinket on Nov 3, 2009
Very well described, from not so good to a negative turned into a postive.
CA Johnson on Nov 4, 2009
I liked both of your haikus. I liked how you wrote them from both points of view. I think you did a great job.

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