A November 5th/09 Haiku about the words love and forgive.

Pain and suffering

Will melt away if we do

Forgive our loved ones

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  • Guy Hogan on Nov 4, 2009

    This can be so difficult to do but to do it is a sign of wisdom.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 4, 2009

    Love and forgive are two essential things to make our life more complete. Without these two things, one’s life is handicapped.

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 4, 2009

    I agree with Guy. It is hard to do. At least we can try to forgive those who have hurt us or if we can’t go up to them just do it for ourselves.

  • Valerie Curtiss on Nov 4, 2009

    You know what they say, forgive and forget.

  • Goodselfme on Nov 4, 2009

    Great heartfelt messages and well composed my friend!

  • PR Mace on Nov 4, 2009

    There are times your can forgive but not forget. Such a heartfelt tone.

  • Themax on Nov 5, 2009

    Love your Haiku’s :)

  • ken bultman on Nov 5, 2009

    This may be your best one yet. Well done.

  • giftarist on Nov 5, 2009

    Great message..

  • papaleng on Nov 5, 2009

    A universal truth well-said in this beautifully-penned Haiku.

  • deep blue on Nov 5, 2009

    Absolutely right and we have a light feeling within our hearts. Nice sharing.

  • chitragopi on Nov 5, 2009

    Love always forgives. nice poem

  • neet on Nov 5, 2009

    The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong.
    Beautiful write.

  • K.Reshma on Nov 5, 2009

    Well written

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 5, 2009

    thoughtful and meaningful.

  • Jane Jane on Nov 6, 2009

    nice message and so true but at times it’s hard to open our hearts and forgive.

  • Stan Wilson on Feb 22, 2010

    very nicely put and in a way that is so simple in itself…the best messages of all are short and sweet….sweet as….

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