A man realizes his wife is in love with another man.

Now Comes the Crying

By

R.B. Parsley

Verse One:

When I looked into your eyes,

I knew your heart beat for him,

I saw all the lies,

And I knew our love had came to a end,

Chorus:

Now comes the crying

of a heart that was true,

Now comes another night,

Without loving you

Verse Two:

I heard him on the telephone,

Saying sweet nothings in your ear,

I knew I’d be sleeping alone,

With all my fears.

Verse Three:

When the morning comes,

I’ll be gone,

And you’ll have no place to run,

Then you’ll realize you were wrong,

Verse Four:

Now comes the crying

of a heart that was untrue,

now comes another night,

Of wishing I was still loving you,

Verse Five:

Now comes the crying

Of a heart that won’t mend,

Another night of wishing the pain would end,

Fade: Now comes the crying

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Comments (7)
  • Debra. on Sep 10, 2009

    Wow, that was wonderfully expressed. Although, quite sad, but beautifully written. I could feel the heartache in your words.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 10, 2009

    Such a sad and heartfelt piece. Beautifully written.

  • Nikita K on Sep 10, 2009

    A very well thought out song like poem with expression and feelings and the emotions are almost palpable. Nice stuff.

  • Tim P Stavert on Sep 10, 2009

    Taht was another sad song Randy, which is very well written but sometime like my writing it is time to move on and vary the style a bit. I am not criticising, just a bit of advice to give your good work an extra dimention or there is a danger of type-casting.

    Best Wishes with no harm meant

    Tim

  • Lex92 on Sep 10, 2009

    how sad! I hope everything gets better and happy again :)

  • PR Mace on Sep 12, 2009

    Hi Randy,

    Well done as always. You are a gifted writer. I have been working more shifts and been very busy. I will try to drop you a line in a few days and tell you what little I know about Nick.

    Take care, Pam

  • Maryanne09 on Nov 15, 2009

    Awwww. Very well written article on Now Comes The Crying.

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