Now I See

richard reed on Sep 10, 2010

Another teardrop falls

some more sniffles on the sleeve

from a moment you had,but

one you don’t believe

how could this happen? feeling deceived

this over bearing thought,

when will it leave?

was it a mistake? OR

maybe a blessing

its hard to tell at the moment,

my mental is testing,

for these emotions,that my heart starts to question

DAMN!!!

To Be Continued………………

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Comments (7)

Dee Gold on Sep 10, 2010
I’ll be waiting for the continuation.
GodsGrace on Sep 11, 2010
Very Sweet
Joie Schmidt on Sep 11, 2010
Heart ache is never easy*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Joie Schmidt.
Francois Hagnere on Sep 11, 2010
Great heartfelt poem, I can’t wait to read the continuation.
Stay blessed always my friend,
François
V rank on Sep 23, 2010
so moving…
Renee Hudson on Sep 24, 2010
I too will be waiting on the continuation. And heart breaks/aches are never easy, but it’s how we react in the bad times that shows how strong we are as people. Very nice poem.
Shirley Aguas on Oct 19, 2010
I would like to check out the continuation

Hi there!