Very well expressed haiku. Great job writing this for the challenge.

Neat and to the point!

Nailed it

Well said.

You met the challenge nicely! Cleverly done.

A gun, too, can be fired–and all that once lived is still alive.–if you know what I mean. Good poem, concise–like i like them.
comes at you in drama–cool!

I prefer the 2nd version but it didn’t fit the challenge.

Well you know – those tin cans can be dangerous creatures. Get a cut and nast infection Yikes – kill em all I say.

Thanks for playing dude – especially seeing you didn’t have much time. You’ve been a great contributer for the challenge this year – you’re the best.

Well executed (pun intended)

awesome!!

neatly done ma’am.

Nice Haiku for the challenge Marie. I like the second one best too, tin can lies dead. Very funny line. Well done.

Nice Haiku Katie.
Sad for the snake.

^5Good job Katie. When it comes to poetry I’m useless *g*