Nuisance Poem

Amsky on Mar 12, 2009

Tags: annoying, challenges, nuisance

Challenges in a form of nuisance poem.

Hey listen! Can you dance?

No, you can’t unless you take out that life buoy in your belly.

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Hey listen! Can you sing?

No, you can’t unless you open your mouth and practice DOREMI.

Hey listen! Can you write?

No, you can’t unless you have something in your mind.

Hey listen! Can you cook?

No, you can’t unless your mother taught you.

Hey listen! Can you play?

No, you can’t unless you know the rules.

Hey listen! Can you work?

No, you can’t unless you have the patience.

Hey listen! Can you learn new things?

No, you can’t unless you have willingness.

Hey listen! Can you do this?

No, you can’t unless you will try.

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Daisy Peasblossom on Mar 12, 2009
Hear! Hear! Well-written.
rockjuneDrock on Mar 12, 2009
nice pic dude! hehe
kate smedley on Mar 12, 2009
I like the style of this, good message too.
Alice Wonder on Mar 12, 2009
This has a different and rather interesting structure! You conveyed the message well. And I really like how the poem builds up to the last line
Investinmenetwork on Mar 12, 2009
lovely poem andthe picture is nice too, well written.
Darla Cooke on Mar 12, 2009
Nice poem.
MMV Abad on Mar 12, 2009
lol! Nuisance? Not really! Good work on this!
monica55 on Mar 12, 2009
A very nice and funny poem, but it sends out a good message
Monica
Melody SJAL on Mar 12, 2009
That was very good!
rutherfranc on Mar 14, 2009
that`s it Amsky, convince everybody..
Amsky on Mar 14, 2009
To all my friends whose supports are continuously I thank you all. Your comments are my inspiration to write and contribute to our society. Your comments are highly appreciated…Amsky
2tet on Mar 15, 2009
Thanks Amsky… This composition is different.. somewhat comical like other pieces of mine. Good job!
James DeVere on Mar 16, 2009
Hey, can you Amsky? I can! j
Likha on Mar 16, 2009
Yes, you can, Amsky.. You’ve just done it. You’re off to a good start in poetry. Has your drug prevention article been published yet? Didn’t see it.
Amsky on Mar 16, 2009
Yes Likha! Dunno why it’s not in my page yet…
A Wallbank on Mar 17, 2009
Very interesting; refreshing to read the slightly different rhythm on this.
spiritwalker on Mar 17, 2009
I like this and it is quite original. Simply said…you can do anything if you are educated and fit enough to do it!
Colleen Ranney on Mar 19, 2009
Love this. Very high spirited!
miss cornelia on Mar 20, 2009
Not true about the cooking. I cook a lot better than my Mom, my Dad taught me.
Jose Monaca on Mar 26, 2009
I agree with miss cornelia! By the way, the poem is very well written, cheers!
cleblanc on Mar 31, 2009
cool poem.
OhSugar on Apr 2, 2009
I like it very much. There is a nice message there.
Jessica Fike on May 7, 2009
Made me smile, great poem :>)

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