Nuisance

Darla Cooke on Nov 1, 2009

The ending of a relationship.

You are a nuisance in my life,

please pack your bags and leave.

This will be our final goodbye,

you have destroyed my entire world.

Seducing me will no longer work,

for the passion has surely died.

I don’t want to see your lying face,

my interest in you has disappeared.

There have been too many secrets,

my love for you has shattered.

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diamondpoet on Nov 1, 2009
Very nice write.
martinpm on Nov 1, 2009
Good poem..
neet on Nov 1, 2009
Gud one.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 1, 2009
That is so sad, but you expressed your feelings well.

Christine
petercurtis97 on Nov 1, 2009
Good you have expressed finality now move with it and don’t turn back.
Olivia Van Logum on Nov 1, 2009
Good strong poem!
Goodselfme on Nov 1, 2009
Your strength is throughout this well composed piece.TX, friend and wish you continued healing.
ken bultman on Nov 1, 2009
Adios, hombre.
Tanya Wallace on Nov 1, 2009
Wonderfully expressed poem! I can feel a lot of anger in this one.Good stuff!
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Nov 1, 2009
I agree with Mystify. It’s very well expressed and the feeling of anger is oozing out. Great write!
Brenda Nelson on Nov 1, 2009
indeed.

i had a horrid boyfriend for years I put up with his crap, drinking, spending my money, having friends over that stole from me… looking back I wonder why I put up with it for so long, finally leaving when he turned to physical abuse.
CA Johnson on Nov 1, 2009
I really loved your poem!
Linda Lori on Nov 2, 2009
Strong and passionate!
alc on Nov 2, 2009
A great write! Thanks for the share!
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 2, 2009
u have arrived ma’am

just lovely
STEVE666 on Nov 2, 2009
You tell him, Darla!

Hi there!