unnecessary disclaimer weakens the poem. When you intro like that it takes away the writers credibility. I am guilty of it myself from time to time.

Overall a simple and good poem with a good message.

Great write!! True in so many cases and like brad said noone here really knows you so have fun with it!! Make everything your own and keep writing!

What is it that makes you feel this pain so young? Your poetry is good so you should be proud of that.

I like your type of poetry. Effective and it rhymes! Personally, I’m not a fan of poetry that doesn’t rhyme ( brought up differently hehe)

instead of, It must be this way. would , so so lame , not fit?, or it must remain, { trying to be helpful:}

Dude you rock… your sht rox… In the end is all about what you think,how you fell, and how you look at it. As for me……. I feel ya yo. I been there. Done that. Still dealing with sht from it.

…It’s ALL(everything) about how ya look at it.
but w/e lol. Sht just have fun. Nice work yo