Poem.

Its not a crime

to make more time

with my daughter in mind

and find nursery rhymes

so I take the climb

for sweet sublime

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  • ageeinc on May 14, 2010

    Short but cute. I would like to see you go on in more detail but this would be a good start. Not trying to offend, it is a sweet poem I just think with your talent and use of words I have seen you could do more. I have enjoyed seeing your poetry and would love to see it in a longer form :)

  • Val Mills on May 14, 2010

    cute

  • shelpeare on Jun 18, 2010

    You can check out my interpretation of “Mary had a little Lamb” as being based on the Bible with a twist here:
    http://www.bukisa.com/articles/294623_mary-had-a-little-lamb-a-true-bible-story

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