Ocean of Love

Cebah on Nov 11, 2009

Poem, destiny, depth, love.

Your love is an ocean of deepest turquoise -

It draws me in with the hypnotic ebb and flow of the tide.

My heart rides on the tip of each crested wave -

ocean surf soaring at the speed of light to the furthest shore.

To fall crashing within the storm as each surge -

pounds the rocky margin relentlessly, unremittingly.

There is no escape – I am destined to ride

each peak and trough of your vast ocean until the end of time.

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Comments (8)

TroostAvenue on Nov 11, 2009
Please don’t be offended but the metaphors didn’t seem to follow properly in my mind even though an overall sentiment does come through.
Cebah on Nov 12, 2009
No offence taken TA, just thought I’d try a different style for a change :O)
drelayaraja on Nov 12, 2009
Great picture. Unique writing style.
diamondpoet on Nov 12, 2009
very beautiful.
Jane Jane on Nov 13, 2009
pretty nice.
travis on Nov 13, 2009
very good i loved than liked it
Cebah on Nov 13, 2009
Thanks for the comments, the artwork is by an artist, Skye Gentle @ http://www.skyegentle.com/
She’s very talented.
Pithom on Nov 18, 2009
Love… the rough with the smooth… for a lifetime. A great sentiment, and elegantly put.

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