Ocean Waves

Darla Cooke on Aug 31, 2009

Tags: Haiku, ocean waves, Sandy Shoreline, seashells

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Ocean waves cresting

Upon the sandy shoreline

Scattering seashells

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Comments (10)

cardy on Aug 31, 2009
Nice short and sweet to the point i like it.
ken bultman on Aug 31, 2009
Nice. Watch for the rip currents.
Nikita K on Aug 31, 2009
Aw, that sounds so beautiful. You really magic simple words to beauty! I love the scattering of sea shells. It looks so amazing in my mind. Lovely work Darla!
alc on Aug 31, 2009
Lovely write!
mystery61 on Aug 31, 2009
Beautiful, I wish I was there!
STEVE666 on Aug 31, 2009
You sure like your Haikus, Darla
Emma Green on Aug 31, 2009
lovely haiku!
teddybear55 on Aug 31, 2009
short and sweet, but very descriptive and picturesque. I could see it all in my mind. beautiful haiku.
Yovita Siswati on Aug 31, 2009
beautiful haiku!
CutestPrincess on Sep 19, 2009
beautiful haiku again…

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