Every gang of kids has one, our was named Dean.

He pushes into the crowd
Trying to be part of the circle,
Talking ‘cool’
Or ‘tough’,
Although he is neither.

“Wanna see my knife?”
He wheedles,
As if that were enough
To make him a man.

When they joke
He sneers.
“That ain’t funny,
Let me show you funny.”
And then he falls
On his face.

No matter the subject,
No matter the speaker,
He is a seagull
Dropping his waste
Over everything they have,
Incensed at his exclusion.

Alternately gruff
And ingratiating
His failure
At joining the ‘In’ crowd
Eats him thin,
So he tries again
Using the same techniques,
Expecting different results.

They laugh at him
To his face
And behind his back,
Keeping him around
As a jester
Without giving him the freedom
Of a jester
To speak his mind.

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Comments (9)
  • BlueRoses on Dec 4, 2008

    Dean? I recall another….name… ;)

  • BugdanL on Dec 4, 2008

    There was a kid named Billy McGill, who always hung on the fringe and never fit in anywhere. He drifted after school.

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Dec 4, 2008

    Very well expressed and written. :)

    -M

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Aug 21, 2009

    well, I identify with the subject of the poem. I was the odd man out.
    in my case I didn’t have to do or say anything in order to create hazing, jeers etc
    but that’s okay
    my feelings got hurt but they never got to know me which was their loss.

  • paulo guimaraes on Mar 21, 2012

    Awesome, very true about everyone having a Dean. Like John Bender on, The Breakfast Club.

  • booguloo on Mar 21, 2012

    He reminds me of an antibully, if there’s such a thing. You know beating himself up.

  • Mariya Koleva on Mar 23, 2012

    Ditto with booguloo – anti-bully :-) Nicely structured poem – it caught the full scope of the situation.

  • Erick Flores on Mar 28, 2012

    This is constructive to those who fall in this circle. Well written!
    -Erick F.

  • Magdalena Herman on Apr 2, 2012

    Nicely said! Well, I think that such people should search for real friends and not try to be cool for no matter what prize…

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