Sometimes something has to die in order for other things to thrive…


Two sunflowers with baby leaves

happy side by side in June

upon the patio enjoyed the sun

I hoped one day they’d bloom.

 

The summer sun was hot

and parched the summer lawns

one sunflower grew tall

the other seemed to fade a little

and lean against the wall.

 

It could have been her partner’s shadow

shielding her from light,

or was it his insatiable thirst

to drink up every drop in sight?

 

In ‘Sunflower World’ he was the champ,

a handsome tall young thing

but all the goodness meant for two

was filling into him.

 

You cannot call it selfishness,

for God made sunflow’rs right,

and for survival of the fittest

there must often be a fight.

 

The heat, without enough to drink

tipped Mrs. to one side.

Glossy leaves turned sunset yellow,

she was burning up inside.

 

Self immolated upon the wall

no flowers will she provide.

It was for him

and him alone

she lived

and suffered,

died.

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  • Lwandaz Tale on Jul 21, 2010

    True even in real life with people, though the he here can also be the she..A picture of life painted here Magic Quil.If the imagery in this poem is borne of an actual event; I deeply admire your creativity, your keen eye and introspective-ness.

  • Abhipray Sahoo on Jul 21, 2010

    Excellent flow and creativity!

  • LoveDoctor on Jul 21, 2010

    Lovely lovely poem. Beautiful sunflower.

  • drishti8 on Jul 21, 2010

    Wonderful poem with nice sunflower picture.

  • V rank on Jul 22, 2010

    I love sunflower because its seeds taste like nuts… soothing poem…

  • tlm7573 on Jul 28, 2010

    beautiful…love your expressions

  • jamesII on Aug 29, 2010

    Sad! I cry–for the flower that is–I could care less about the greedy and suffering human! They are idoit and idoit squared–if you know what I mean! Cool!

  • Brewed Coffee on Sep 4, 2010

    That is life…some have to sacrifice while others take all the sun. This is a very lovely poem with beautiful imagery

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