A very random poem about my journey to buying a bottle of chocolate milk today.

I went to Dunkin Donuts

to order some breakfast.

I was about to leave when she

yelled, choco milk!

a thirst grew in my throat,

but already it was too late

all throughout the day I dreamed

of gleaming brown delight

until at Kordian’s Market, my mommy said to me:

you want a choco milk? go get one, but you pay me.

so now I sit here writing,

drinking choco milk,

and knowing that this poem doesn’t flow

like my yummy choco milk

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Comments (3)
  • xinnianhao on Nov 7, 2009

    Nice job!

  • svishnugopal on Nov 7, 2009

    hope you have enjoyed a lot yourself while writing this..very nice

  • Hansika on Nov 8, 2009

    good

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