Ode to Eve

Aauhein on Apr 9, 2009

Tags: honey, phi, twinkle

The twelve trees of life.

The apple of my eye Twinkle in the night Phi in the sky baby Sweeter than honey Lover to my father Wife of my brother Sister of descendants Mother of my life Keeper of my dreams Thief of knowledge First of sinners The victim of a process

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cassandra a on Apr 9, 2009
a nice write,
Parish Loveless on Apr 10, 2009
Very nice. I commend upon you for the brilliant significance within such a minimum of words! ! !
teddybear09 on Apr 18, 2009
Nice
kate smedley on Apr 21, 2009
Another nice one, the brevity suits your style
hfj on May 12, 2009
Nice write and deep thoughts. You have established a style all your own. well done.
Jan Daniel on May 21, 2009
Eve would be proud. Well done!
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on May 28, 2009
You write in such abstract terms. It makes for provocative reading. Makes me think.

Jerry
nsmukundan on Oct 12, 2009
really good topic. Clearly written…My best wishes to you…
oldster on Oct 13, 2009
Pretty unique — Aauhein. Pat on the bum for that.
dloriginal on Dec 12, 2010
Really deep. Thanks
adhiiw4hyu on Jun 19, 2011
excellent

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