Of Monotony

LOVELYHONEY on May 29, 2009

I have fallen short of thirty poems ,will post more regardless of this poem u all know me by now.

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Of monotony

Monotony he says

I only ask of you,

Oh Lord,

Give me the strength,

To encourage people

To be positive.

As I do so I seek,

Your pardon,

For my over indulgence

Some friends get bored,

Reading poems,

Others love to read,

Only poems.

So I have now undertaken,

To write articles,

For a selected few.

Some friend wants a break,

I therefore so take.

So that the inborn,

Stereo typed monotony,

For a while I could break.

I had thought of it earlier too,

As I compose,

No less than hundred poems,

From Triond I shall take,

A sabbatical,

Which my friend,

Now I force upon you.

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DA Cournean on May 29, 2009
This is a nice piece Lovely!
richard reed on May 29, 2009
great write! enjoyed it much…thanks for the share,,.Rich
Darla Cooke on May 29, 2009
Very nice poem.
Princess Dre on May 29, 2009
good write..God Bless – fan/friend – Princess
moteintheeye on May 29, 2009
well it is a good poem i do not like the part where you are not staying. hope to see more of you soon.

motie
101 on May 29, 2009
L H,this is great show of deep thoughtful emtions.I love the honest poet that you are,which leads me to say I hope you continue sharing your reads with us all!always,Gary La Buda
George W Whitehead on May 29, 2009
It’s good to step back for a while, LH.
Ramalingam on May 29, 2009
Now you have come to terms what others have dictated; it is the reality also.
brianberu on May 30, 2009
You can carry on writing poems, and write articles as well.
Uma Shankari on May 30, 2009
Why a sabbatical from Triond? Will miss you. Be back.
Jan Daniel on May 31, 2009
I hope you continue to write poems and articles in the future. This poem reflected the human emotion of monotony very well, and it was anything but monotonous. Well done!
rizzei on Jun 1, 2009
yes well done! i deeply understood it:) keep on writing and inspiring other people:)

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