I know; I don’t want to talk about watches either.

I give my lady a gift
And she gave me one too:
Watches.
We wore them on our wrists
Like a bond
An unremitting memoir
Of our precious moments
Hearing the ticks
(and they tick an exciting thud)
Felt like every heart beat
And every solo performance
Of the moon.
But the ticks paled
And our glances dwindled
That they became less special
We still give it a wink
Habitually
To tell time
Time to get up
Go to work
Time for break
For lunch
Time to go home
Have dinner
And time to go to sleep
When the time comes
That the watches
Weaken
We will be a little anxious
Try to shake it
And blame the cold weather
Then we would care less
Until we don’t wear
The watches anymore

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  • Westbrook on Dec 1, 2008

    I get the feeling that this was a fading relationship and in the end, the watches have no special meaning. It’s kind of sad.

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Dec 1, 2008

    the bonds of love are inseparable…Brian

  • Joie Schmidt on Dec 2, 2008

    Interesting metaphor – very nice work.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • eddiego65 on Dec 3, 2008

    Interestingly unique poem! I like it!

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