A wee change of pace I hope…

Left on the back burner

Things get a little over done

As time and life don’t wait

Things get to be too heavy

Should we be stacking up

Be it thoughts or feelings

.

Was it a Xmas want

Not a need

Proud when you find it

But!

I must ask for time out

AM just a simple man

Only need some space

Me time… no news no phew!s

Mostly thoughts of you, and you.

.

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Comments (11)
  • Atanacio on Dec 30, 2010

    Yeah Matt I like this :)

  • lyan08 on Dec 30, 2010

    Nice Poem.

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 30, 2010

    Me too, Matt. nicely done.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 31, 2010

    Well done.

  • Yovita Siswati on Jan 1, 2011

    Nice poem

  • OhSugar on Jan 2, 2011

    Very nice. I agree, we all need a time out just to find our centers.

  • Val Mills on Jan 2, 2011

    The first two lines really set this one up nicely.

  • J M Lennox on Jan 6, 2011

    Enjoy Matt. :-)

  • Sweety on Jan 7, 2011

    Great lines! Loved reading it all!

  • gvgatchalian on Jan 15, 2011

    All of us need space one in a while. Great work!

  • malinikadhir on Jan 17, 2011

    eft on the back burner

    Things get a little over done

    As time and life don’t wait

    Things get to be too heavy

    Should we be stacking up

    Be it thoughts or feelings

    .
    These lines were especially meaningful to me……loved reading
    some words which seemed to reflect ……..reality of life …

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