I wrote this poem on an interesting subject… failure. I based it upon a beautiful girl who, although beautiful, failing at life by particapating in dark acts around her which lead to her downfall.

Oh young girl; Fallen angel of my eyes. 
Arise from the dusty quarry; The unseen casket. 
Oh whitened snow; The purest treasure in which surrounds me… cover me.
Shelter my heart so my love will no longer be rushing; Hastening 
toward the tenebrae that surrounds my whole world, our whole life.
Oh humbled queen; The broken diamond; The shineless jewel.  
Hide within your sorrow to protect the false gospel in which you forge.
Wipe thy weeping tears and make haste, towards your downfall.

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  • Jim Sposki on Oct 25, 2011

    Beautiful :)

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