Oh Dreaded Flu Bug: Haiku

KimberlyMartin on Feb 9, 2012

Tags: flu, Haiku, Poetry

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How I feel.

Oh, dreaded flu bug,

Why do you imprison me?

I want my life back.

I cough, I shiver.

Even my hair weighs heavy.

Give me my life back.

I can’t leave the house,

When I do, I regret it.

Go get your own life!

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Comments (10)

xphantoms on Feb 9, 2012
Like it, nice
Martin Kloess on Feb 9, 2012
a Triad!
Tiki33 on Feb 9, 2012
The flu bug is just that. It can be a real pain and the just miserable. I like this it is quite unique.
Dora77 on Feb 9, 2012
i;ve clicked on i like it button for you.
marqjonz on Feb 9, 2012
Thanks. I’m getting over it now.
nita kusuma dewi on Feb 9, 2012
nice article
Safa on Feb 10, 2012
nice
Dora77 on Feb 11, 2012
liked it!
Steven West on Feb 17, 2012
I quite agree. The flu bug really bugs me too. Nice poem.
PruandMe on Feb 21, 2012
cough, sniff,
I’ve never seen a triad before, very cool

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