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Oh! God! Where are You?

CVSivaprakashan on Nov 18, 2010
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I am on lookout.

      Oh ! God,   where are You?

      I am  here !

      Where ?

      Everywhere!

      I can’t see You!

     Close your  eyes.

     Then?

     What  do  you see?

     It is  all  dark.

     Oh,  that  is  my  coverlet!

    Oh! God ,  Where  are  You?

    Open  your  eyes.

    Then?

    What do you see?

    Everything.

    Oh, that  is  only my  playground.

     You  are  hiding?

     Then  how  could  I  see  You?

     You  search and  you  ask.

     Whom?

     Yourself

     I ask  myself?

     And  then  who  will  answer?

     Who  will  answer?

     Oh! God!!!

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  • john smither on Nov 18, 2010

    Interesting poem.

  • Hendrik on Nov 18, 2010

    Very beautiful!

  • Suni51 on Nov 18, 2010

    Hi friend- He is every where, HAVE FAITH. God is within you, just close your eyes and find Him smiling.

  • Inxxu on Nov 18, 2010

    interesting.. I hope you´ll find him soon… it is so awful to live in dark …

    Inxxu

  • papaleng on Nov 18, 2010

    beautiful one, Yes, god is everywhere, you only have to close your eyes and talk to Him.

  • CHIPMUNK on Nov 18, 2010

    good share

  • Angelgirlpj on Nov 18, 2010

    I’ve had too many days when I felt like this. God is light, he will light the path if we allow him.

  • Sail338 on Nov 18, 2010

    Good Share

  • Eunice Tan on Nov 18, 2010

    God is never hiding, this is me who always run from Him.

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 18, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • dino renaldo on Nov 18, 2010

    nice share

  • PRIYADARSHINI on Nov 20, 2010

    good share

  • Robert Heston on Nov 20, 2010

    I liked this, thank you.

  • WebScribe on Nov 24, 2010

    I like to think your last line is no longer a cry in the wilderness, but an answer, as in “Who will answer?” “God will!” it’s nice that your poem leaves the meaning of that final line, as a cry or affirmation, up to each person’s interpretation.

  • Treasures on Nov 29, 2010

    This was thought provoking. I like the fact that God is here!

  • Angela Ohm on Dec 2, 2010

    God is everywhere ! We need only look within ourselves and we will find god. His love is always with us and it will lead us through the darkness into the light !

    This is a wonderful poem ! Thank you for sharing ! :)

    Blessings
    Angela

  • maco1981 on Mar 6, 2011

    good share

  • Kristina on Mar 6, 2011

    Nice work

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