About nature and how it controls our lives.

Oh how I admire nature and the sky, the freedom it brings to my eyes
The great sun that hangs in the sky gives us all life and in the
end will make us all die.
The nature controls all of our lives
the power it has is entrancing to you and I. For it can make us all live
or make us all die, from the sky we breath and from the nature we feed,
so it would be wise to not upset the nature and the sky.
Oh how I admire nature and the sky, the power to kill us in the flash of an eye
a storm could come and make us all die, the fruit of life could not grow and make us all die.
So i would be nice to nature and the sky for they are the ones
keeping us all alive.

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  • Lily River on Dec 10, 2008

    Sounds like you believe that nature is more powerful than the spiritual world, and being a Native American Indian I can respect your opinion. You are right. Everything in nature effects eachother.

  • landom on Dec 10, 2008

    It’s interesting, I would have to agree with the first person, an i like the way you put into perspective that it gives life and death, always intersting…

  • Anonymous on Feb 3, 2009

    ameteur…

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