Oh, My Goodness: What a Day

S. L. Harrison on Sep 25, 2009

This poem about minor things gone wrong.

Oh, My Goodness, What a Day

I looked up
And saw the sky.
A raindrop fell
And hit my eye.

I wiped it off
It hit the ground
Without making
Any sound.

I looked down
And there it was.
A raindrop?
No, a piece of fuzz!

I turned left
And hit a tree.
Fell to the ground
and broke my knee.

I got up
And then turned right.
A flock of geese
Had blocked my site.

I shut my eyes
I blew my nose
I guess that’s
Just how some days go.

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Shamanz on Sep 25, 2009
I thought this was very well done. Only thing I thought that may need fixing is the number of “I”s you used here.

Then again, I don’t specialize in poems, you can ignore my suggestions =)

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