I would like try and explain to you how it feels to be in the presence of GOD.

He came to me in a vision.

I embraced the moment.

I feel the spirit move me.

I feel his arms hold and soothe me.

His  love radiates all over.

We began to come together.

I know that he’s there.

His presence fill my air.

I’ll never roam that path alone.

Never to wander, never to falter.

For he guides me safely home.

He’s with me through troubled times.

Our relationship is one of a kind.

He will always remain true.

The more I stayed with him.

The more I grew.

I feel myself changing.

He holds the world it’s heavy, no one blames him.

So let’s lift him up.

And continue to drink from his communion cup.

But most important to all he is a friend.

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  • ashan1614 on Oct 12, 2009

    It’s an awesome experience to be in His presence, and especially to go beyond the veil. Great write!

  • CorysMom on Oct 12, 2009

    That is a nice poem! I know that feeling :)

  • diamondpoet on Oct 12, 2009

    It so good to share my feeling about God with others, We only exist because of him, not through an ape.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 12, 2009

    just lovely
    the very thought of god

    is so soothing

    half the world revolves around Him

    the other half he goes around

  • sandie on Oct 12, 2009

    hes more than a friend hes our father to, we are his children until he calls us back, good poem.

  • mo hoyal on Oct 13, 2009

    This was beautiful. Thanks for your contribution. Too many people are Godless now!

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 13, 2009

    Beautifully written!

  • giftarist on Oct 13, 2009

    Well done.. Great piece!

  • CA Johnson on Oct 13, 2009

    What a beautiful poem! I agree that God truly is a friend to all of us.

  • emmahaynes on Oct 15, 2009

    I am so happy that you stand firm to your beliefs :)

  • Greg Wolford on Oct 16, 2009

    Loved it! No one can know how awesome it is until they feel His presence for themselves. I feel sorry for those that haven’t and pray for them.

  • Aiyanna on Oct 17, 2009

    Love this… :-)

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