How beautiful Liane.

Absolutely wonderful!

excellent poem…

Lovely, lovely, lovely poem! Very romantic!

I’m an innocent child at Triond,
Innocent child shall not do any harm to others,
Any harm to you and me,
Sure must involve somebody.

Let me send you my innocent heart,
from being polluted by an unexpected dirt,
That has got our heart fractured.

Let me cool for a while,
Before venturing into a new world,
Unspeakable lips,
Want to speak the sacred part,
For the benefits of others,
But not to destroy others.

Any intrusion in my life at Triond,
Is a cruel fact that put me,
Into the critical moment,
As since before I know you.

Thanks for being supportive,
and royal to this friend, Chan.

I hope you can catch the meaning of my poem. They’re my inner words that I’d like to deliver to you, my dear friend.

No one can ever break our relationships…

Take care and regards,
Chan

Wonderful wtiting and beautifully romantic!

Very romantic, Liane.

Whom ever you had in mind is/or will be a lucky guy Liane.

Grant

Smoothly and lavishly expressed.

A beautiful read. It makes me appreciate the love me and my wife have for each other.
Thank you, Liane.

Wow! Amazing lines. He is very lucky indeed, Liane.

Thank you all with all my heart for your beautiful comments – this is actually a creative piece reflecting the type of universal love I believe most people dream of – (the dream of what I want someday.*)

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.

I would romance you
till your heart shines brightly
with a love
Never to be taken lightly

tony h

Wow, this poem has left me speechless,
its amazing and full of beauty.
So much meaning and depth

how sweet and romantic, love it! God bless.

so lovely and romantic indeed,

Every woman’s dream, expressed so beautifully.

Very good job, Liane! It was really beautiful. The pic went so nicely with the poem.

Wonderfully romantic.

Dear Liane,
Would that I were the object of this writ… Chan Lee had the “write” idea! I might have written something similar but the point is mute now… Wait… Seriously? This is not written for/about someone you are currently involved with?!? Extra kudos then!! To keep that emotion open to whomever strikes your fancy, or whisks you off your feet! I APPLAUD!!! Because I wear my heart on my sleeve the same every day. (Please forgive the cliche expression, but I don’t view this as a negative thing as some people do!) Nice work as usual… Your newest biggest fan,
Tom

A very nice poem.

Beautiful, wonderfully flowing poem. It\\\’s not hard to sway among the gentle words. Astonishinly moving. I adored it.

Beautiful and very romantice. wonderful job in in this write

I hope that you find the love your heart deserves and desires. Nice, smooth, mellow, romantic poem.

Can’t help but get swept away in the words that you paint. Great job!

Every Englishman’s dream is surely to read such passions form a lovely lady and you have a fan in me. ~T

Awesome poem Liane!!! You should write more poems – your good at it!!!!

A.M. McDonald