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Oh, My Throat is Tight

Starpisces on Feb 27, 2010
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Oh, my throat feeling tight

When cough, no phlegm inside

When talking, sound like going to fight

I then take the cough syrup at late night

Hope it will soon subside

By tomorrow I should be alright

I hardly fall sick, doctor don’t see my sight

I may visit him this round, just to say “hi”

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  • 8Shei8 on Feb 27, 2010

    oh oh…feel better!

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 27, 2010

    Nice poem.

  • AlmaG on Feb 27, 2010

    Hope you get well soon K!

  • CA Johnson on Feb 27, 2010

    I really liked your poem. I hope you get well soon.

  • wonder on Feb 27, 2010

    Its just an excuse to have cough syrup, very clever.

  • Starpisces on Feb 28, 2010

    Thanks friends for your comments and concern.
    My throat is alright this morning, back to the original sweet voice.. (erhem).., but I have a big swollen gum in my mouth….
    I guess my body is too heaty…

  • giftarist on Feb 28, 2010

    You expressed it well. Good to know that you’re okay now.

  • Sharif Ishnin on Feb 28, 2010

    The temperature is very high now . We need to hydrate more. Get well soon Star P. I think the doctor would welcome you with open arms. They always do.:)

  • diamondpoet on Feb 28, 2010

    Hey try gargling with some vinegar, It works wonders. thanks for sharing.

  • Starpisces on Feb 28, 2010

    thanks everyone, I am okay now.
    haha, Sharif, thanks, I did not see doctor, only left the gum ulcer, this morning it was swollen and it broke off, in fact I did not touch much heaty food this CNY, it’s the weather plus insufficient sleep recently.

  • devsir on Feb 28, 2010

    nice one

  • qasimdharamsy on Mar 1, 2010

    Nice one….

  • sambhafusia on Mar 1, 2010

    Interesting read dear.excellent share..:)

  • albert1jemi on Mar 1, 2010

    good post

  • jovelledeguzman on Mar 2, 2010

    good one.. :)

  • sara2010 on Mar 3, 2010

    Good writing

  • pen2010 on Mar 4, 2010

    nice writing

  • Fatema on Mar 5, 2010

    heheh liked it

  • standingproud on Mar 7, 2010

    awww Bless, hope all in gone Karen, and you feeling all fluless now :)

  • LCM Linda on Dec 28, 2011

    Star, I also seldom see the doctor. Let’s hope we are healthy all the time. :wink:

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 28, 2011

    Funny, I have a sore throat. Ditto Linda’s comment.

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