Just my thoughts and feelings about the visit trends.

Looking at this new feature

Different feelings come rushing

I feel happy when it goes up

You will even see me smiling

My heart sings as it stays there

But when it keeps going down

The curve on my face follows

Sad to say, I think it’s a frown

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  • Elizabeth Abbott on Apr 6, 2009

    This is cute. Well written!

  • Evelyn Moore on Apr 6, 2009

    A mixed blessing!

  • BC Doan on Apr 6, 2009

    I feel the same way Dee

  • Kate Smedley on Apr 6, 2009

    Nicely written, I definitely know how you feel!

  • teddybear09 on Apr 6, 2009

    Very cute, I like it.

  • papaleng on Apr 6, 2009

    You are observant. i like that attitude.

  • Karen Gross on Apr 6, 2009

    Great poem! Mine looks like a zig zag. My friends must be reading my articles every other day.

  • Inna Tysoe on Apr 6, 2009

    That’s cute.

    Inna

  • Miss Heda on Apr 6, 2009

    lol but some of them are good useful ones

    just wish that widget thing u can put on your other personal pages would work on things like myspace

  • Betty Carew on Apr 7, 2009

    Excellent read Dee

  • CutestPrincess on Apr 9, 2009

    i feel the same way, dee…

  • CA Johnson on Apr 9, 2009

    Great poem, Dee. I also feel the same way.

  • Tusaani on Apr 10, 2009

    It’s frustrating but you do get a nice shock when it jumps up out of nowhere, right?

  • Luffy12 on Apr 13, 2009

    same way! :(

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