On a recent night, I went for stars gazing in the hope of catching a glimpse of the Geminid meteor shower, which I heard is the best meteor show of 2009. Guess what? I saw over 20 shooting stars in a span of three hours! What an incredible experience.

The velvet night sky
Was painted with luminous stars.
Shining as they were,
Like small Christmas ornaments.

Glorious Moon was absent,
With the rolls of fluffy clouds.
Oblivious in the night sky,
Anticipating an excitement.

Then came the streak
Of illumination.
One so fast,
It may be hallucination.

There went another,
And more on cue.
One could only wonder
The beauty and the splendour.

Too fast to stop,
To look and stare.
For they flashed
In the speed of light,
Unabashed.

Too fast to ruminate,
To make a wish.
For those bright lights,
Would soon vanish.

Fallen stars go somewhere
But who would have known
Where they had gone?

Shooting stars,
Oh, shooting stars,
So I wonder where you are?

Sights like this may not last,
But at least that was quite a blast!
Watching the night sky in a different light,
What an incredible unforgettable dusk!

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  • ceegirl on Dec 17, 2009

    Nice poem

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Dec 17, 2009

    Hey Nightcharmer, I really enjoyed this journey into the night gazing at stars through your creative writing. The images came to life through your descriptive writing and now I must commend you for a job well done. Thank You for sharing with us all…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Dec 17, 2009

    But don\’t you see how important the poem is…it records a historical fact in 2009 from the eyes of a man of the 21st century for all times.

  • Val Mills on Dec 17, 2009

    Glad you took the time to get this one down in words. I loved your poem.

  • deep blue on Dec 18, 2009

    I do hope there’s no burning planet out in the galaxy burning all the lifeforms in it just to give us a one night stand meteor show. The lines fall in place beautifully in your poem my friend. Well done.

  • alc on Dec 20, 2009

    Enjoyable read! Thanks!

  • S A JOHNSON on Dec 23, 2009

    Wow, you painted a great picture.

  • ladydryle on Dec 25, 2009

    great post…this is really nice you shud know..

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