Sometimes, we are all stirred up, to move from where we are, to where we want to go, trying to find a new horizon.

Oh! The Whistling Wind
Keep blowing through my hair.
My ear embraces, the sound of change.
There is movement under foot,
And, I cannot continue to stay here.
The call is much too strong.
My complete resistance is weak.
My mind has already shifted.
As my feet, still stay in place.
It’s time, to put in motion,
That ever, changing scene.
Where the river of life, is flowing,
When we must follow the course.
Perhaps, I’ll see you there,
If not, maybe, on my way back.

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  • BC Doan on Sep 24, 2008

    Just simply wonderful..

  • Darlene McFarlane on Sep 24, 2008

    I can only repeat what Icy has said. Simply wonderful.

  • Judy Sheldon on Sep 24, 2008

    Whatever the destination, I hope it finds you happy and fulfilled. Beautiful poetry. Thanks and God bless.

  • quiet voice on Sep 24, 2008

    …Hi, BC, Darlene and Judy. you all are so nice to
    comment so positively. Very glad you like the piece.
    Take care always.

  • Liane Schmidt on Oct 24, 2008

    Very good work – you have a gift!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • quiet voice on Oct 25, 2008

    …Hi Liane, Thank you so much for
    your very nice comment. I do feel
    blessed. Take care.

  • MjD on Jul 27, 2009

    Oh, goodness! I think I found an answer to my own questions in your beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing.

    Mary

  • BluSphere on Oct 22, 2010

    Great share! :)

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