This is a piece I started working on quite awhile ago, while I was watching our goldfish swimming in their aquarium and feeling a little unsettled by something going on in my world.

Oh, to be a goldfish in an aquarium

Swimming from one side of the tank to the other

No need to worry about what to eat

Food is provided every day of the week

Their water and tank is cleaned regularly

Bothering no one and no one bothers them

Watching the goldfish playing in their aquarium

One feels calm and relaxed

In some aquariums, however;

There are sinister characters hiding somewhere

Just out of sight

Waiting to strike

When you least expect them

Do not close your eyes or turn your back

Never relax

For you know that they will eventually strike

With a sting that is sharp and painful

Designed to cut and maim

Is this how your aquarium seems to be?

Mine appears that way at times

How do you avoid this circumstance?

Make sure you fill your aquarium

With friendly and playful goldfish

Who enjoy a friendly dance

 

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Comments (6)
  • yes me on Jan 31, 2011

    Liked this one too cheers

  • Likha on Jan 31, 2011

    Great way to release tension. It’s good you own an aquarium.

  • iklika on Feb 1, 2011

    nice

  • albert1jemi on Feb 1, 2011

    nice one

  • SongbirdB on Feb 1, 2011

    What wisdom is your words….Nice share…

  • Glass Half Full Gal on Feb 3, 2011

    So, life is our aquarium and we should fill it with people who are good to us. Right? I like it. :-)

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