I wrote this poem following a particularly uncomfortable bus journey.

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Have you ever wondered why it is

That when you need to catch a bus,

You find they never seem to fit

Most passengers like us?

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You climb aboard to find a seat

Where your knees aren’t rammed in tight,

But it seems that all the seats you try

Your frustrations they ignite.

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You squeeze together side by side

With shoulders hugged so close,

And your buttocks hanging in the aisle

Soon make you feel morose.

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Why don’t they try out the seat sizes

With real people who travel each day?

Then maybe we’ll all be much happier

And our gratitude we’d certainly display.

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Christine Ramsay 19.5.10

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  • 1Mind on May 19, 2010

    Yes, that would be much nicer, wouldn’t it? And a wonderful poem, by the way…

  • real lady on May 19, 2010

    This happens all the time. I agree with you. :)

  • sara20 on May 19, 2010

    Nice to read this piece.

    Keep writing more about it. It is really gracefully and very well written skill.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Cheers.

    Sara:

  • deep blue on May 19, 2010

    I like the flow. I could relate to your ordeals, Christine. Must cut down on chocolates and eat a balanced diet.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on May 19, 2010

    I have experienced it before. Travelling by bus can be uncomfortable especially when it’s overcowded inside the bus. Well-composed piece, thanks and have my “liked it” as usual.

  • simplyoj on May 19, 2010

    Yes, you are right! I had fun reading this poem..

  • petercurtis97 on May 19, 2010

    Good poem about something real and to the point. I had same experience but on a plane seats small and leg room was bad I had to stand and walk to the back to stretch, aw well not too bad I chatted with hostees at least.

  • Starpisces on May 19, 2010

    very interesting poem again, I smiled when reading about the butt hanging at the aisle, hahaha.
    :D

  • jimbob1 on May 19, 2010

    CR…You are bang on…authorities are trying to promote more use and wider acceptance of public forms of transportation but they need to have these forms of transportation adapt to providing rider comfort…take out one row of seats to provide for some uncramped leg room and add an inch or two to seat widths and ridership would greatly increase. Great write and enjoyable read…I hate having to use a shoehorn to try and fit into a too small of space…especially at the rates they charge to ride in discomfort. I voted that I like it…keep up the great work. Thanks…

  • ashan1614 on May 19, 2010

    I think the majority of folks have a wider bottom than public transportation seats allow for. :) Good write!

  • diamondpoet on May 19, 2010

    Christine they never think about our comfort only how much money they can make.

  • Guy Hogan on May 19, 2010

    The more passagers they can squeeze in the more money they make.

  • Sourav on May 19, 2010

    Money sets the rule! Well… also inspires people to get slimmer! :P
    Nice write!

  • Jimmy Shilaho on May 19, 2010

    That was a funny one. Couldn’t help laughing at line 11

  • papaleng on May 19, 2010

    So true, that is also the case in almost all buses in our country, The seat size only fits those who are skinny. You really has a nice way of putting your thoughts in a poem. Thanks Christine for the share.

  • Atanacio on May 19, 2010

    you write so many truths in this little piece thats why I drive on my own or go first class hmm

  • pearl2010 on May 19, 2010

    Very nice write again.

  • moneynwealth on May 19, 2010

    I’ve enjoy reading your poem.
    :) moneynwealth

  • Mr Ghaz on May 19, 2010

    nice one..loved traveling by bus..thanks for sharing

  • PR Mace on May 19, 2010

    I don’t ride buses to much but I have the same problems on planes. I love the way you can make the verses flow. I have said this before and I will say it again, you have a talent with a poem.

  • Ruby Hawk on May 19, 2010

    We rode the greyhound bus when I was a child and it made me carsick every time. Later the greyhound cut out service to the small towns and communities and the bus wasn’t available for those who didn’t live in larger towns and cities. Too bad, many people depended on the bus.

  • Joie Schmidt on May 19, 2010

    Thanks for sharing!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • drishti8 on May 20, 2010

    Enjoyed a lot reading this wonderful piece.

  • Chris Stonecipher on May 20, 2010

    Hi Christine,
    I have been on the other side where I am squished against the window from someone sitting next to me in our small seats. Your poem is fun to read.
    Blessings,
    Chris

  • bestone on May 20, 2010

    Thank you and hope for the best information that you will get to read articles and by similar embroidery please keep writing.

  • Milton H Peebles III on May 20, 2010

    sometimes I think the same about the cars they are now building. I’m having trouble finding a truck that I can fit into
    Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your heart shine
    ~ milty

  • Vikram Chhabra on May 20, 2010

    A very amusing and fun poem Christine. As a young student I used public transport a lot and know what you are talking about..:)

  • Phill Senters on May 20, 2010

    That’s a good job of it Christine, but I’m afraid like so many thins, the seats are designed with dollar signs in mind rather than the derrieres of those who will use them.

  • johnnydod on May 20, 2010

    Another top poem Christine

  • CA Johnson on May 20, 2010

    I really enjoyed your poem and relate to it. The buses here in New Jersey are uncomfortable too and they are overcrowded.

  • moneynwealth on May 20, 2010

    good that you still can seat, in the Phils not only you’re standing but the push yourself to get in.
    :) moneynwealth

  • Tulan on May 20, 2010

    I enjoyed reading your poem but I don’t have any experience with buses.

  • bellatwix on May 20, 2010

    I’ve always wondered what it would feel like riding one of those double decker buses. They look like the bus in Harry Potter :)

  • Christine Ramsay on May 21, 2010

    I am so glad to see we are not the only ones who suffer from tiny seats. I often think these buses were designed centuries ago when people were smaller. Thanks so much for your comments.

    Christine

  • monica55 on May 21, 2010

    Perhaps they don’t want us to get too comfortable and sleep off the bus. So they they make sure that we stay awake with the pinch from the little squeezes. LOL. A great write Christine.
    Monica.

  • Val Mills on May 22, 2010

    :-) now I know why I never travel by bus.

  • sara20 on May 22, 2010

    Style your writing is good, you slaughter order method described in the article you have so much good information.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on May 23, 2010

    Awesome article, with so many truthful facts.
    Fantastic

  • mark ramsay on May 25, 2010

    Ha ha! I know what you mean

  • yes me on May 25, 2010

    Well, Christine me being mr lean and not mean, I just squeeze in between the window and mr large he he nice write. cheers

  • S A JOHNSON on Jun 1, 2010

    lol the seats on the buses I’ve ridden haven’t been to bad, though I do try to get a window seat because being a bigger girl, it’s easier to squish closer to something that doesn’t mind squishing closer to. Skinny people rarely have trouble sitting in an aisle seat (while sitting next to a bigger person) unless they like to spread out and purposely plant limbs into the aisle. However, since it’s rare that they usually, truly squish toward the wall, a bigger person isn’t going to squish into someone they don’t know and the result is uncomfortable sitting.

  • T. S. GARP on Jun 17, 2010

    Great analogy and poem! I’m sure comfort is not on their mind when they designed buses. :)

  • heidiefernandez on Jul 16, 2010

    Great poem!!! I liked it a lot…

  • Jacques Berkeley on Dec 6, 2011

    Excellent!

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