A short poem I wrote after checking my article "The Blind Love & The Broken Heart" for comments.

Oh Triond members, how I love your support,
Unfortunately, it has almost become a sport.

To get so many views, money and fans,
That you one day end up, in some crazy trance.

Cause you shouldn’t forget, what brought you here,
Your desire to write, in the blogosphere.

Well at least you’re the ones who keeps me going,
You write a comment, a message, you read, unknowing,

That even though, I would not earn a cent,
I would never leave Triond, – For to earn money is not what I intend.

I like the community, and it’s easy to get friends too,
It is really a great possibility..

Yours sincerely,

Blu

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  • drelayaraja on Oct 22, 2010

    We all love supporters… it should be mutual.. great poem for triond friends…

  • M0n3y1989 on Oct 22, 2010

    Love you man! You write the true words. You just remind that money is not everything. It’s love or friendship that makes up human. Love you dude. Amazing, Superb, Beautiful. cool in the form of poem!

  • clay hurtubise on Oct 22, 2010

    Nice piece! I’m with you: I don’t earn enough for a happy meal, I’m just here for the writing community.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • HeavensMessenger on Oct 22, 2010

    I’m with you too. I earn only to support my online gaming needs, but In the process, I’ve met greats friends and Learnt many writing skills in the process.

  • krrymarie on Oct 22, 2010

    So true.
    I don’t mind if I don’t earn anything, I just enjoy the writing.
    Nice poem.

  • Larry Fish on Oct 22, 2010

    No, we’re not going to get rich here. However I have met some nice friends and enjoy reading other people’s articles. A lot of talent here.

  • Karen Gross on Oct 22, 2010

    A very cleverly constructed poem. You have a creative flair for rhymes. Is “blogosphere” a real word? If not, it should be.

    I check for comments eagerly too, and I love this community. Which is good, because I only earn a little bit more than Clay does. I could probably afford a McHappy meal, he has to make do with McKittens.

  • PSingh1990 on Oct 22, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • shraqs on Oct 22, 2010

    Nice one man.Genius

  • wonder on Oct 22, 2010

    My pocket a hollow, an abyss
    friends whether I comment or no, are ever a bliss.

  • quiet voice on Oct 22, 2010

    Cute and nice. You write well. Take care

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 22, 2010

    hello Blu
    you alone are not in the blue
    i am also with you
    so many have
    in the last year or two
    lured me to many other sites too.

    i wish all of them knew
    there ain’t any money
    on all sites i knew
    but after a year and a half
    can you guess
    how time did pass ?

    so many firneds i’ve made
    one too many
    and sure enough
    before joining Triond
    i hadn’t any .

    so friends who read me
    and i read them too
    we fan each other
    every now and then tis true
    so dear Blu i’m with you
    where ever you are
    together we’ll do
    and read each other\s
    won’t you too.?

  • Phoenix Montoya on Oct 22, 2010

    Very nice, Blue!

  • giritharanj on Oct 22, 2010

    nice share – gj

  • ThunderBolt on Oct 22, 2010

    Such truth in your poem, Blu!
    Beautifully written, and I thank you for writing this piece! ;)

    ~~~Thunderbolt~~~>

  • Emmie on Oct 22, 2010

    I love support too, it is nice to have it when we spend so long writing sometimes.

  • carissimi on Oct 22, 2010

    :) this was fun to read..

  • Michal Dorcak on Oct 23, 2010

    I love support too :) , anyway, Triond is really a good place for pleasure writing and such.

  • ninjablade on Oct 23, 2010

    Nice poem! I totally feel the same way.

  • Val Mills on Oct 23, 2010

    Just loved reading this :-) Thanks.

  • Minister Marlene on Oct 23, 2010

    I love your poem. this is a very sweet writing platform. Tried a few others but not quite the same. No millions here but nice people. I added you as a friend not quite sure you’ll keep up but when I read interestingting stuff, it’s like my hand goes straight to the friend button. I just got here, not sure how to proceed. Can’t keep up with everyone but have read some great articles here.

  • Kopykween on Oct 24, 2010

    really a sweet poem, you write well and deserve all those comments and support.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 24, 2010

    If you read and comment others. they will do the same.

  • Raj the Tora on Oct 26, 2010

    nice tribute, liked it.

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