The Oil Slick travels…

 

Oil,

the sea would spoil,

the slick contracted into a floating lump,

wildlife actually touched the substance,

it was almost like an attack,

as the oil slick touched back,

stress and anguish and so much more,

as death washed up on a black beach,

the oil slick kept washing ashore,

almost at a leisure pace,

covering everything all over the place,

the ebony pebbles crushed loudly

under humanity’s feet,

nature fought the demand,

fell to the command,

as the hermit crabs

were caught in the coarse black sand,

no warning lights flashing,

as the birds were oozing and splashing,

millions gushed before a single cap,

and the wildlife caught up in it

like a Venus fly-trap,

almost as if the oil would recoil,

and react to stimuli,

a darkness rising,

as wildlife realized their future was on hold,

as the present would unfold,

and a savior was left out in the cold,

too much oil,

and they suffocate,

common sense, blown,

as the oil slick becomes a growing sea foam.

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Comments (10)
  • clay hurtubise on Jun 16, 2010

    We are all to blame for addiction. Time for action and make oil a minority in the energy business.
    Good piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • jupiter2010 on Jun 16, 2010

    I think your thoughts reflects in your words.

  • LoveDoctorGoodBye on Jun 16, 2010

    Good imagery and excellent piece. Thank God the oil slick hasn’t spoiled the beautiful beaches in South Florida yet nor endangered our wildlife.

  • yes me on Jun 16, 2010

    One more for that shelf Frank , and as the other guy, Clay said it is us all, who are to blame for it…. with the dependency on oil. cheers bud here’s hopping they can stop it.

  • sara20 on Jun 16, 2010

    Excellent manner and very well-written sentence is doing, with useful information includes a good things you have in your article.

    Thanks and cheers.
    Sara

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 17, 2010

    A wonderful poem, its this consciousness that is required in environmental matters.

  • lillyrose on Jun 17, 2010

    you hit the nail on th head with this poem, it is such an horrific time.

  • write4money on Jun 17, 2010

    Nice piece.
    Good information is available here, and keeps on writing.
    Anjalina.

  • Domenico Cigliano on Jun 18, 2010

    So vile and horrifying, well said

  • clickmarbin on Jun 18, 2010

    good post, keep it up atanacio

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