Old

Kaavs on Nov 12, 2009

Tags: age, old

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Aging.

Growing older,
A lot Wiser nonetheless.

Gracefully aging,
Maturing mentally, I confess.

Shared smiles and tears,
Not carrying around the past mess.

Welcoming a new year,
My age I’ll leave to you to guess.

Cheers,
Kaavs

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Comments (10)

Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 12, 2009
dats a good one…
cutedrishti8 on Nov 12, 2009
Great one…Cheers
giftarist on Nov 12, 2009
Clever – nice piece!
fragile18 on Nov 12, 2009
great piece!
Darla Cooke on Nov 12, 2009
Nice poem.
clafleur on Nov 12, 2009
i just turned 37 and i am feeling old.
Vikram Chhabra on Nov 12, 2009
From your picture it seems you are a 20 something. You are no way old!! Besides, your soul is timeless. Why worry about a temporary body…?
STEVE666 on Nov 12, 2009
Wonder what inspired this, birthday girl? Nice write and once again, happy birthday!
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 14, 2009
21 is my guess

right??
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 29, 2009
now that i know

you know

so we both know

nice bday u had

we all did

ur love share

u r not young

nor are u old

ur in poetic parlance

poetic GOLD

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