Just a sad love story.

                     

                                            

Her story was cold,

but immensely moving and delicately told,

they would carve their names in a heart

on the old brown willow,

he became a casualty of war,

now she cries in her pillow,

all night long,

her right went so wrong,

her tears stains the soil,

as her world was abruptly thrown

into terrifying turmoil,

she’d known a man once,

to whom she had said

everything that popped into her head,

now he’s dead,

and her tears were like rain,

no one to blame,

she buries her head into the pillow,

thinking of their names

on the old brown willow.

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Comments (7)
  • yes me on Nov 26, 2010

    Liked this one, even though… I was waiting on a flick of the switch nice one Frank cheers

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Nov 26, 2010

    “All around my hat, I will wear the green willow…”

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 26, 2010

    Nice One..

    :-)

  • My World on Nov 26, 2010

    Good Post

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Nov 27, 2010

    Enjoyed reading.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 27, 2010

    That is so sad but beautifully written.

    Christine

  • albert1jemi on Nov 28, 2010

    great share

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