This poem is about how weird it feels when you are approaching some one you like.

It’s a nice warm day to go out for walk

So I throw on my flip flops and head on out

I’m so relaxed all by my self

I’m in touch with my senses it’s a day all to my self

 

Oh no, there he is the guy from science walking towards me

He’s the one who makes my heart sing

And puts roses in my cheeks

But I know he doesn’t even notice me

I’m walking towards him

But he no doubt is walking past me

Should I say hello

Maybe stop and talk

But what to say my mind is blank

My neck is stiffening full of stress

We are paces away and I have nothing to say

He just walked right past me

Barely nodded his head

Acknowledging he knew I was there

Now I’m walking away confused and in pain

So much for relaxing on a walk in a nice sunny day 

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  • jesse lennon on Aug 8, 2009

    Aww I felt sad towards the end ,why didn’t the girl say a friendly hello,see you in science class tommorow.

  • clafleur on Aug 11, 2009

    Puppy Love, how nice.

  • mystery61 on Aug 13, 2009

    Awwww, how sweet! Keep writing, you really are very good.

  • orlandoJP on Aug 13, 2009

    great poem!

  • Theresa Johnson on Aug 14, 2009

    sweet poem the only suggestion is to change i as there to i was there….

  • hfj on Aug 18, 2009

    Nice story. Love will make you go blank, in mind and mouth. Well done.

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