A poem about a walk with my son when he found a butterfly.

 

I watch as you follow me,

like a little duckling behind me.

 

Stopping only to explore.

You’re little exited sequels I can not ignore.

 

You have found something that you,

were not looking for.

 

You’re eyes sparkle with delight,

as you hold you’re treasurer with all you’re might.

 

 

You are a loveable sight,

full of fun, happiness, and light.

 

I see you’re face begin to change,

unsure of what to do.

 

You look up at me hands held high.

You look up towards the sky.

 

You know what to do so let it fly.

 

It tickled mummy,

it felt funny.

 

You follow the butterfly,

with you’re wide open eyes,

you watch it as it flies.

 

We both shout out our goodbyes..

 

 

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Comments (10)
  • Darla Cooke on Sep 23, 2009

    A beautiful poem.

  • Jane Jane on Sep 23, 2009

    lovely.=)

  • DulceCorazon on Sep 23, 2009

    a delightful poem. Such moments are worth writing about.

  • lillyrose on Sep 23, 2009

    so lovely! little children open our eyes x

  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 23, 2009

    Beautiful one..

  • Dena McCusker on Sep 23, 2009

    great write

  • Goodselfme on Sep 23, 2009

    Children create such a greatness in our lives.TX for sharing this with me.

  • writing4angels on Sep 24, 2009

    very well written.

  • giftarist on Sep 24, 2009

    Nicely done..delightful experience to be written!

  • larry84 on Oct 21, 2009

    Well written! Thanks for the share!

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