A person has aspired to be the recipient as a bed of roses. He sowed and nurtured intellectual seeds that grew to become flowers which he dreamed about.

You’ve sowed the seeds

Diligently you watered them

Day after day

While in the fields nurturing them

- – -

That was how you became

The man that you were

Supposed to be

You hung in there

Hell bent on accomplishing

Your goals

- – -

By sheer determination

You were able to beat the odds

Urged on by your teachers

Who stood by your side

- – -

They chastised you

When you fell short

They became your cheerleaders

Urging you on to greater

And greener pastures

- – -

Little by little you began to bloom

Beautiful petals that alarmed everyone

You’re now an asset to your community

Following in the footsteps

Of all the great souls that preceded you

- – -

You’re no longer a rose

For you’ve become a garden

With many roses

That beautify your surroundings

Day and night

- – -

You’ve earned a place

As that special bed of roses

For which you’ve longed

- – -

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  • mdrkarim7 on Jan 11, 2012

    You’re no longer a rose

    For you’ve become a garden

    With many roses

    That beautify your surroundings

    Day and night

    I like it.

  • Rosettaartist1 on Jan 11, 2012

    nice

  • pattiann on Jan 11, 2012

    I love it

  • caribbean369 on Jan 11, 2012

    I think this poem is very delightful and a real joy to read. This is a beautiful, well thought out poem! :)

  • sanataryal on Jan 11, 2012

    Great creativity can be seen in your poetry . I appreciate your selection of words . Touchy poem .

  • aheed411 on Jan 11, 2012

    Splendor

  • indianwriting on Jan 11, 2012

    enjoyed this one :)

  • sheilanewton on Jan 11, 2012

    Great philosophy in your words. Super.

  • juliachild on Jan 11, 2012

    good share….

  • prsol46 on Jan 11, 2012

    Very nice work!

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 11, 2012

    et tu

  • mphsglo on Jan 11, 2012

    Very nice illustration.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 11, 2012

    Lovely

  • sisterhood on Jan 11, 2012

    this poem shows happiness and content enjoy the beauty of every flower in your garden.you sow the seed you reap the crop.

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 12, 2012

    Impressive work.

  • papaleng on Jan 12, 2012

    Simply beautiful.. 3 Thumbs Up.

  • ittech on Jan 12, 2012

    wonderful

  • iva75cpb on Jan 12, 2012

    Interesting perspective but very professionally written.

  • yes me on Jan 15, 2012

    Green grow the rushes O
    Green grow the rushes O
    Comes to mind for me here cheers Erwin

  • yes me on Jan 15, 2012

    Sorry Green grow the Rashes O.

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