Written November 12, 2008.

You ring the bell, it is just past sunrise,
With full knowledge I’m still in my bed clothes,
And no one here to protect me.
Standing there in your warm leather jacket,
With chips on BOTH shoulders,
You look down on me.

How do you so easily judge?
You do not know me, nor my heart.
You have not walked even one step in my shoes.
Yet those hurtful words roll off your tongue with ease,
Yes I saw the twinkle in your eye,
And the smile forming as you look me up and down and say that I am trash.
Who do you think you are?
Land owner does not give you that right.

Oh yes this experience makes me want to fight.
As you close my front door you look back to see,
The restrained tear slip from my eye, You smile.
Keep on shaking your head at my bicycle,
Before you can jump into your truck,
I am down on both knees.

Oh Lord, Thank You, for the affordable housing,
And the reminder of what I could be.
Thank You for keeping me humble,
And maybe give him 10 seconds to see.

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  • Lauren Axelrod on Nov 14, 2008

    This is heart wrenching Virginia. I love it.

  • Dendro Azures on Nov 15, 2008

    Brings back memories. Wonderful work.

  • Virginia Wolfe on Nov 15, 2008

    thanks for your comments, and your kind words. it is still very hard to put my emotions out there for everyone to see.

  • papaleng on Nov 17, 2008

    you really treasure past wonderful memories, this one written with gentle stroke of thoughts,

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Nov 18, 2008

    Yes, it is one thing to be emotional in general, but another to do it on the Net for the world to see. I think we need to find a good balance in there, probably different for each person. Brian

  • Chris Stonecipher on Dec 29, 2008

    The Lord brings us gifts although sometimes hidden. Maybe the Lord was trying to open the heart of the land owner. Well written Virginia.
    Bless you,
    Chris

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 30, 2008

    I loved the emotions you portrayed, the image of the landlord, standing there was very clear to me. good work

  • Kim Buck on Jan 5, 2009

    Be strong and sometimes it does take both knees.

  • Virginia Wolfe on Feb 12, 2009

    thank you all for the comments and support. sorry that it took me so long to get back with you.

  • Milton H Peebles III on Feb 16, 2009

    Very interesting point of view. Wish my land lord was that tactful.

    Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine!
    milty

  • Virginia Wolfe on May 12, 2009

    ;)

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