On Clouds of Hope

Joie Schmidt on Mar 13, 2011

…knowing you’re forever mine.

I’m walking
On clouds of hope
Heartlike shapes
That drift
And collide
With the pieces
Of solitude
You somehow
Always find

I’m reaching
For the glimpse
Of love
You place
Before my
Passion-filled
Eyes

The rise
Of briefest
Touch
The bloom
Of deepest
Rose
A crimson
Blush
The caress
That already
Knows

Blooming deeper
Effervescently
Alive

Surrendering
To the rush
Of knowing
You’re forever
Mine.

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CHIPMUNK on Mar 13, 2011
Beautifully written
Persuasion on Mar 13, 2011
good poem
Jay Banzon on Mar 13, 2011
a nice poem
rappeter13 on Mar 13, 2011
Wonderful poem.
marlened on Mar 13, 2011
So beautiful!
GameLive on Mar 13, 2011
Surrendering
To the rush
Of knowing
You’re forever
Mine.

beautiful
mattezane on Mar 13, 2011
The rhythm of the poem embodies the tone…one really does bounce from cloud to cloud.
j0anne on Mar 14, 2011
super like..:)
Likha on Mar 18, 2011
Again, a fabulous piece Joie, really coming from the heart.
yes me on Apr 2, 2011
Nice lines here Joie cheers
Joseph Scott on Jun 18, 2011
Lovely!

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