You carved us up as an invader while you took our children. Our women. Our lives.

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  • Kelin Hurt on Feb 28, 2009

    A long read but fun sometimes

  • am3ric@n b33r on Mar 1, 2009

    Nice dude…great job. Really cool twist of words.

    damn that conrad!!!

  • johnnyboy on Mar 1, 2009

    ya i agree with american…beer? watever-it was really cool; i liked how you analyzed what seemed to be a book written by Conrad. i’ll have to look that up; im feeling kind of left out right now…:(
    good job fresh!

  • Irish Clove on Mar 1, 2009

    Oh, now this is a wanker-it won’t let me say I like it. Any ideas, Fresh?

  • Leafy Mongrol on Mar 14, 2009

    Irish Clove-the server occasionally overloads at times. Nothing to worry; it’ll fix itself the next time you load the page probably.

    Good job, fresh.

  • Lucky 7 on Mar 28, 2009

    ya irish clove give it some time…it’ll work itself out.

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