On The Edge of Heaven.

Just to have you with me I would have done almost anything Only a blind man could have failed to notice the state that I was in. Every time we met, my heart would skip a beat Never imagined our relationship would end in tears and defeat. There is so much we have in common and in my heart I felt so sure this is the man I have waited for You made me feel so happy and secure. But as time went by, we did not grow closer but drifted further apart The more I held on to you, the more you closed the door to your heart. My other half is what you are to me to know all this but still having to walk away Is more than I can bare, because in your arms is where I belong and where I want to stay. On the edge of heaven but forever on the outside looking in I will turn away from love now, this game at which I will never win.

2
Liked it
Comments (3)
  • clay hurtubise on Jul 1, 2010

    Chemistry is a two way street.
    Good piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Emmie on Jul 1, 2010

    A very well written heart felt piece.

    Emmie

  • LoveDoctor on Jul 1, 2010

    I gave up on love a long time ago!

    Now I am wiser. I use my head instead of my heart.

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading