Once

R G Lowry on Oct 20, 2009

Tags: damaged, link, loved, misplaced, Once, rotted, rusted, security, trust, twisted

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There is always a time and place to do or feel something once.

I loved you once but now I hate

so many things damaged and misplaced

Tears have rusted and rotted our link

now we are twisted and out of sync

I gave my life and gave my love

I filled you with security and trust

You did nothing but tear us up

and now I am in pain with torn out guts

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willie wondka on Oct 20, 2009
well said, i felt all of these things you are going through, love is so painful, its like a drug and you need a fix, but you cant have it so you go through the task of riding it out, good poem, no great poem.

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