Once Abused

Roberto Sardelli 1 on Sep 28, 2009

A poem of Abuse.

Once abused,

You lose trust,

Trust in those around you,

Trust in the world,

You are faced,

With your own way,

To protect yourself,

From further pain,

You associate all the abuse,

Emotional abuse,

Physical abuse,

Sexual abuse,

Mental abuse,

Verbal abuse,

As one abuse,

Afraid to open up,

You only want to,

Protect yourself,

After being,

Once abused.

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Comments (10)

Drew Diligence on Sep 28, 2009
Utter crap!
Roberto Sardelli 1 on Sep 28, 2009
What can I say Drew? What happened to me when I seven has made a stronger person and a better person, not to lower myself to your standards of comments. Thank you for your comment and view.
Darla Cooke on Sep 28, 2009
I know the feeling well.
Jane Jane on Sep 28, 2009
I’ve never seen drew given a positive comment. I’m sad for your sad experience.
Roberto Sardelli 1 on Sep 28, 2009
But thats why, I will never let comments like Drew’s comment ever get to me Jane Jane
cutiepie32024 on Sep 28, 2009
Heyy listen that “Drew” dude is lame and stupid not 2 mention immature. I liked it I think ur a terrific writer. And I’m sorry 4 watever happened 2 u. Send me a message cuz I like meeting new ppl. And if u could check out/comment my material it would be awesome. Thanx. (:

-Abby-
Roberto Sardelli 1 on Sep 29, 2009
thank you cutiepie32024, it is a great shame how people can lower themselves. I also won’t lower myself and judge Drew, I am not that type of a person. No offence, and thank you for your comment.
Prettywolf on Oct 14, 2009
I know what you mean by this and I’m sorry for whatever you had to go through.
Aiyanna on Oct 23, 2009
Know that feeling all too well!!!
The Cinders on Aug 13, 2010
Fantastic! I really enjoyed this and liked how when I read it out loud, it flowed in a kind of unconventional way. Good job.

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